I think what you typed made a ton of sense. But, what about this?

suppose you wrote a catchier post title? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your blog, but suppose you added something that makes people desire more? I mean Guestbook is a little boring. You should peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they write post headlines to grab viewers to open the links.
You might try adding a video or a related pic or two to get readers interested about what you've written. Just my opinion, it could bring your blog a little bit more interesting.